Birthday reflections

Birthdays are good for you – the more you have, the longer you live.

Happy birthday to me.

No – it’s not one of the BIG ONES (that comes next year).

Birthdays are a good time to reflect on the year just completed. What kind of a year did I have? When I look back over the last year it has been one of some big highs and deep lows.

Highlights:

  • My first trip overseas last December and January (see my travel blog).
  • Trekking in the Himalayas
  • Seeing Mt Everest up close (20km is close when you walk in those mountains).
  • Getting some fabulous photos on my new digital camera (see my photo gallery)
  • Getting my three blogs up and running and getting steadily increasing traffic (hi everyone)
  • Getting some of my short stories published
  • Accomplishing more writing this year than ever before.
  • The depth of the relationships developed in the Bible study group I lead.

Lowlights:

  • Being diagnosed as diabetic earlier this year
  • Struggling for months to adjust to this diabetic life (a work in progress)
  • My wife having two serious operations this year

I won’t dwell too much on the lowlights. I struggle with the wise advice to accept such things and confidently say, “This too shall pass.”

There is so much to look forward to, including the exciting potential of my blogs, some writing projects with great promise and the freedom to explore other possibilities, including the prospect of further travel next year.

Writing Hint #15 More about metaphors

I’ve written before about using metaphors in one’s writing. They can be useful little devices to enhance one’s writing, if used carefully. Thinking of fresh, new metaphors to bring colour to your writing is hard work. You have to be particularly creative. Writing a novel or story, for example, is like building a house; it helps to have a plan. It also helps to have all the necessary equipment.

Sometimes I feel like a caterpillar. At first I seem to be making very little progress. All those legs are so easily tripped up and I stumble around not knowing where I am going. Then I think I’m in a cocoon, making absolutely no movement at all. But finally, just when I despair of ever making anything of real value, a beautiful butterfly emerges to grace the world with its enchanting presence.

I’ve just read a post written by Roger von Oech on his blog Creative Think. Roger takes a completely different view of metaphors. He uses metaphors in his workshops to help participants think about their company and how is it travelling. This is really creative thinking and a wonderful way to stimulate their thinking. See the link below to read the whole article, including some funny – and tragic – metaphors created by some participants in his workshops.

Life is a bowl of fine icecream – smooth, creamy and sweet, leaving you with a yearning to come back for more.

Copyright 2006 Trevor W. Hampel.

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Blogs are not like books

Blogs are not like books.

That might be stating the obvious but it is worth thinking about if you are a serious blogger. Even if you just blog for the fun of it, most bloggers want traffic to their blogs. Most want their readers to return and to become loyal readers. Most would like many visitors to comment on their blogs.

When you read a book you often start with page one and read right through to the end. This applies mainly to fiction, of course, but I usually do the same with non-fiction too. The obvious exception to this is reference books which are not designed to be read cover to cover.

Liz Strauss on Successful Blog asks the question “Do you think of your blog as if it’s a book?” She points out that not all readers come to your blog on the front page first. It fact the majority probably come via search engines and links from other blogs to other pages on your blog, sometimes deep within your archives.

For example, on my birding blog, the most popular post was written six months ago in April of this year about nesting behaviour of Blackbirds. The nesting season is now in full swing here in Australia and it has recently created a new flurry of interest with many comments.

Some suggestions:

  • How up to date is the information in your old posts?
  • How often do you update your old articles?
  • How often do you return to the archives and rewrite or edit your writing?
  • How often do you link to old posts, thus driving visitors deep into your archives?

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Doing the writer’s sigh

Recently I have done the writer’s jig a few times. This is when I get a story or poem accepted for publication in a magazine. It is in the form of a little celebration dance around the room, accompanied by a yippee or three.

Sad to say, I did the writer’s sigh a few days ago. Another rejection letter in the mail. [SIGH] I’d done all the right things (write things???) too.

A few writing hints:

  1. Read the publisher’s guidelines and follow them carefully.
  2. Read the magazine you are submitting to in order to understand their style and the type of stories or articles that are used in that publication.
  3. Edit your story – make it as good as you can – rewriting as needed.
  4. Read your story aloud, watching out for phrases and sentences that sound wrong or clumsy.
  5. Submit your story, article or poems.
  6. Go on writing new material.
  7. When you get a rejection, print out a fresh copy and send it off again.

Remember –

  • read every day
  • write every day
  • take time for yourself every day

Short Fiction #21 Broken Relationship

Broken Relationship

“HOW DARE YOU!” shouted Ben, face red with anger.
Angela, ashen and silent, stared at the wall.
“Well?? Whaddaya have to say for yourself?”
“I…I…I’m leaving.”
“It’s Pete, isn’t it? He’s the reason you’re leaving.”
“Yes,” she said. “I really love him.”
“Well – good riddance. And when you go, don’t forget his drinking bowl and leash.”

All rights reserved. Copyright 2006 Trevor W. Hampel.