Haiku #18 Egret

A long white arrow

Ponderously flying up

River in slow motion.

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Copyright 2006 Trevor W. Hampel


2 Responses to “Haiku #18 Egret”

  1. Rick Cockrum says:

    That’s a beatiful image, Trevor.

    As an aside, I don’t know if you want the double-spaces between the lines in your poems or not, but if you don’t, you can put each verse in a paragraph, with a break at the end of each line. In both the editors I use pressing Shift-Enter creates a break instead of a new paragraph.

  2. Trevor says:

    Thanks for the hint Rick. Didn’t know that – will try it.