Archive for September, 2006

Poem #8 Colours in my head


Colours in my head

There are colours in my head,

Throbbing, bobbing,

On and off.

Flashing, crashing,

Through the dark.

Glaring, flaring,

In and out.

Setting alive

The barren

Wasteland

Of loneliness

In my mind

With a patchwork

Carpet of memories

Of love.

I see that pathway

Stretching unendingly

Before me.

Take my hand.

Hold it firmly.

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Copyright 2006 Trevor W. Hampel

Writing Hint #12 Write what you love

You’ve got to love libraries. You’ve got to love books. You’ve got to love poetry. You’ve got to love everything about literature. Then, you can pick the one thing you love most and write about it.”

Ray Bradbury

Good advice.

Without a love or a passion for your subject you will struggle to write. It will seem hard work. It will take effort. It will sound false to the reader and you run the risk of turning them away. Some may never return.

I love watching birds. I hope that on my birding blog I write about them with a passion, a love that flows from my words and pictures encouraging readers to return often. Similarly with my travel blog, where I share my love of exploring the great Australian environment and cultural heritage, added recently by a growing love for Thailand and Nepal.

As for this writing blog, I have dreamed of being a writer since the age of about eight. It saddens me to some extent that I let life get in the way of my dream, my passion to be a writer and my love of words, books and literature. Granted, I have been able to share this love with thousands of students in a 35 year teaching career. I know I have influenced many, an influence that has resulted in transformed lives. For example, a former student of mine recently began a career in journalism with our local newspaper.

Now, however, in retirement from teaching, the dream is well and truly alive. I spend many hours every day pursuing my love of words, books and writing.

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Writing Hint #11 Metaphors

Metaphors, similes and idioms are literary devices that add so much colour to our writing. When used carefully they are like diamonds sparkling in the sun. Your poetry can become little gemstones and your prose a goldmine of beauty.

Come on Trevor. That’s laying it on a bit thick.

But it remains true that metaphors, similes and idioms, used wisely, can enhance one’s writing and your writing begins to paint a glorious canvas for the reader. It needs to be said, however, that they need to be used carefully. Mixing your metaphors can lead to mixed up readers. Using metaphors carelesslessly quickly becomes a literary minefield. Careless writing is like trying to climb a greasy pole; it gets you nowhere fast.
The following writing hint says it beautifully:

“Even if a mixed metaphor sings, it should be derailed.”

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Writing Hint #10 Verbs

From time to time – well, far too frequently actually, I hesitate over something I have written. I read it, reread, rewrite, change the words and even change the order of words just to make sure everything is correct.

Despite this, I still make mistakes.

Oh the wretched trials of being a writer! One area that I have particular problems with happens to be in the use of verbs. Straight forward you might say. Indeed, and so it should be, but sometimes I get terribly confused.

I wonder if this are the result of 35 years of reading the scribblings of emerging writers in my classroom? Now I don’t seems to be able to distinguish right writing from wrong righting.

So when I comes across this writing hint, I were quite perplexed:

Verbs has to agree with their subjects.

Short Fiction #12 The Separation

The Separation

Mike was stunned. Never had Jenny spoken to him like that.

He sat thinking.

“It’s over,” he said at last.

“Yes!” she snarled back.

“Well, I think I’d better go then.”

“Right! And don’t ever come back!” she snapped.

Mike left reluctantly.

“I’m really going to miss playing in her sandpit,” he thought.

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Copyright 2006 Trevor W. Hampel