Short Fiction #3 The Open Door

The Open Door

Blake stopped.

He stared at the door.

He could tell at once that all was not well.

“What have we here?” he asked the open portal.

There was, of course, no reply.

Blake entered the house.

All was silent save for the dripping from the bathroom.

It was there that he found her body.

In the tub.

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Copyright 2006 Trevor W. Hampel

Read more of my short fiction here.

Edited November 2013

 

2 Responses to “Short Fiction #3 The Open Door”

  1. jon beeg says:

    im no professional writer but this isnt great i think i could probably write better…

    • Trevor says:

      Thank you for your comment. I am pleased that you do not have ambitions to be a writer – professional or other. There is no way you would get published with writing like you have displayed. Without even trying I found seven glaring errors in your brief comment.

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