Short Fiction #3 The Open Door
2 Comments »9th July, 2006; Category: Short Fiction, Short Stories
The Open Door
He stared at the door.
He could tell at once that all was not well.
“What have we here?” he asked the open portal.
There was, of course, no reply.
Blake entered the house.
All was silent save for the dripping from the bathroom.
It was there that he found her body.
In the tub.
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Copyright 2006 Trevor W. Hampel
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Edited November 2013
im no professional writer but this isnt great i think i could probably write better…
Thank you for your comment. I am pleased that you do not have ambitions to be a writer – professional or other. There is no way you would get published with writing like you have displayed. Without even trying I found seven glaring errors in your brief comment.