Writing Hint #44: Edit, edit, edit
Over recent days I have highlighted the different stages of writing:
Step 1: Plan
Step 2: Write
Step 3: Rewrite
Step 4: Edit
The editing stage is often overlooked by inexperienced writers. This is a crucial stage in the writing process. In the editing stage you need to go back over every word in the piece of writing; it doesn’t matter if it’s a fifty word filler paragraph or a five hundred thousand word novel.
Check for these things:
- Check Spelling: spelling mistakes are avoidable; check – don’t assume it’s right.
- Use the correct homophones: get to know the difference between know and no, right, rite and write, to, too and two. There are dozens more.
- Use the right word: make sure you are using the right word for the context. For example, “She gave the allusion that she was very intelligent.” The correct word should be “illusion.”
- Punctuation: make sure it is all there – and that it is used correctly. Study the classic authors and how they use punctuation for effect.
- Check your typing: no matter how carefully you type, errors will creeep in – see what I mean? Get someone else to check for typos. And watch out for words that have been missed out. (I actually found one after I published this article.)
- Check your use of apostrophes: mastering these is crucial. If you don’t, the Apostrophe Police will come knocking at your door, headed by my daughter.
- Cut out all unnecessary words: ideally, this is done in the rewriting stage. Avoid padding just to reach the word count. (I just cut out four unnecessary words from that last sentence.)
- Grammar: use correct grammar. This is too big a topic for this short article.
Good writing.
Further reading:
- Writing hints – more hints about writing.
- How to be a more productive writer or blogger – includes a list of strategies
- Short story starters – another article in this popular series I have written
- Write first drafts quickly
- Five rules for effective writing
Remember:
- Read every day.
- Write every day.
- Take time for yourself every day.
Writing when the wheels are spinning
I’ve had about four weeks of frustration with my writing and blogging. I feel like my wheels are spinning; lots of activity but I’ve been going nowhere.
Actually, the driving analogy is very apt. I seem to have done nothing but drive over recent weeks. I do occasional relief driving for a local courier company. I recently went back to work full time for three weeks. While the pay was good, the hours were very long and the work exhausting. Not a good time for writing. In fact, there was little time spare for writing. I’m still trying to catch up with my email.
I’ve been trying to get back to the writing this week but I have really struggled to build momentum again after such a long break. I will not call it the dreaded “writer’s block” but it was not far from it. Many writers experience dry periods where it is a struggle to get the writing moving again. There may be plenty of activity – like the engine revving and the wheels spinning – but there is little if any forward movement. Sometimes we just can’t get going.
Robert over at the Middle Zone Musings writes about this topic too. His post called “How to counter the dreaded blankpageitis.” In this post he refers to my short story starters. These posts I have written are designed to get you writing so what about it? Give it a go – it can be great fun.
Good writing.
Another article worth reading – with several suggestions I know help me can be found here: Life sucks – writing on the bad days.
Writing Hint #31: Write a character sketch
I quite often use a warm up writing exercise before I begin the main writing tasks or projects for the day. Sometimes I write in my journal and sometimes I write a new short fiction story.
Writing exercises:
Another good writing exercise is to write character sketches. Here are some suggestions:
- Choose a person you know well: write a character sketch about that person.
- Sit on a bench in a park: observe the other people there and choose one person to write about.
- Go to your favourite coffee shop: observe the other people having coffee and write about one of them.
- Watch the first ten minutes of a movie you’ve never seen before with the sound turned off: write a character sketch of one of the characters in the film.
- Choose a photo of a person from a magazine, someone you know nothing about: write a character sketch about that person.
- Read through the death notices in your local newspaper, choosing one person you have never heard of before: write a character sketch about that person.
- Choose a name at random from the telephone directory: write about that person.
What to include:
- Describe the appearance of the person, both body features and clothing.
- Outline about four or five major events in the person’s life.
- Describe the person’s personality.
- Write down three or four sayings the person loves to use in everyday life.
- List the preferred food, drinks and recreational activities of your character.
Follow up activity:
If the character sketch becomes so interesting and powerful as you write, how about letting the character take over and tell his or her own story? There might well be a short story lurking there waiting to be released. Perhaps even a novel?
Good writing.
Further reading:
- Writing hints – an archive of articles full of writing hints and ideas.
- Short fiction – a listing of short stories I’ve written as writing exercises.
- Short story starters – a series of articles listing many ideas to start you off with writing stories. (Very popular)
Writing Hint #27: Use your memories
I went to a funeral last Monday. It was in my old home town of Loxton, South Australia. I grew up on a farm and went to a one teacher school about twenty miles from Loxton.
The funeral was for an dear old lady who ran a combined store, post office and telephone exchange in the small town where I grew up. She had reached the wonderful age of 102 and was very active until a few weeks ago. Her funeral was a celebration of a full and interesting life. Her daughter and I went through school together always in the same class. She now lives only a short distance away from us.
After the funeral most of the family and friends gathered in the church hall for lunch. It was a wonderful time of renewing friendships and acquaintances from fifty years ago. A group of us started reminiscing about our school days together. I had forgotten some of the stories of what we all got up to during those carefree days. The memories came flooding back. It was a special time.
Using your memories:
Memories can be a goldmine of resource materials for writing, whether that be in articles, stories or novels. Here are just a few hints for writing activities from memories:
- Write a series of articles about your school days. Compare your school experiences with school of today.
- Describe the community you lived in as a child.
- Interview an elderly person you first met when you were very young. Write down their memories of days when you were young.
- Write an account of how one person influenced your early life. (For example, one of my primary school teachers inspired me to become a teacher.)
- Make a list of the schoolyard games you played at primary (elementary) school.
- Describe what you liked (or disliked) about school days.
- Think about the home where you grew up. Write a story imagining you lived there all of your life.
- I grew up on a farm near a small country town. Write about growing up in a small town – or visits to a farm or small town when you were young.
- Write about someone from your childhood who scared you – or made you laugh.
- Think back to when you were young. Write about a person who took a special interest in you, looked after you, took you to special places or taught you special skills.
From this list I hope you can see that the scope for using memories from earlier days and childhood are a rich source of writing ideas. They are limited only by your own memory and imagination. If your memory is failing, get together with former classmates and reminisce. You never know what gem stones they will come up with!
Related articles:
- Use your inbuilt story antenna
- Writing opportunities
- Short story Starters – links to articles listing over sixty ideas for writing short stories.
23 Ways to Become a Better Writer
Over the life of this blog I have written many writing hints and given plenty of ideas for writing stories. They have been well received and commented upon.
Scott Ginsberg has written a light-hearted article called 23 Ways to Become a Better Writer. It may read lighthearted and appear to be simple and easy to follow, but his suggestions are seriously great. Even if you only follow several of his suggestions your writing will improve. Why not even implement one each day for a few weeks?
It can’t do any harm. Taking a risk like this is certain to help you with your writing.