Manuscript assessment for writers

Many writers are turning to the services of manuscript assessment agencies in recent years. Getting into print publication can be a difficult road to walk down. Every piece of help and advice therefore becomes important to the emerging writer. In this process, getting an independent assessment of one’s writing can give you just the advice or edge or viewpoint necessary to make the difference between acceptance for publication or being rejected.

Adelaide based crime and romance writer Kirsty Brooks has written a long article – well, it’s actually in the form of an interview – on the virtues of having one’s manuscripts assessed before sending off to a publisher. Many authors have found such an assessment to be very beneficial. The article can be found on her blog:

Disclaimers:

  • I have never used the services of an assessment agency though I am being mentored by a published author but that is something quite different.
  • I have (to the date of writing this post) had no association whatever with the assessment agency run by Kirsty Brooks.

Idiom #9: As the Crow Flies

This week’s idiom:

“As the crow flies.”

Meaning:

The shortest distance between two points.

Origin:

The idiom “as the crow flies” seems to have been in use since the early 1800s. One source I found said:

British coastal vessels customarily carried a cage of crows. Crows detest large expanses of water and head, as straight as a crow flies, towards the nearest land if released at sea – very useful if you were unsure of the nearest land when sailing in foggy waters before the days of radar. The lookout perch on sailing vessels thus became known as the crow’s nest.

Several other sources I found gave a very similar answer. In my experience crows and ravens do not fly in particularly straight lines and there are many other species that may fly more directly to a given spot. On reflection, I feel that the point this idiom is making is that a bird, any bird, is easily able to fly directly from one point to another without being hindered by obstacles like humans might be. This direct flight is therefore the shortest distance between those two points.

Example:

  • “I am three kilometres from my home, as the crow flies, but by car it is five kilometres.”

Poem #20 Come See the Shepherds

Come See the Shepherds

Come, see the shepherds at peace in the field
Come, see the sheep grazing silently.
Come, see the angel proclaiming the news
Come, see the heavenly hosts praising mightily.

Fear not,
Be not afraid,
Good news
I bring to you.
This day in Bethlehem town
A Babe who is Jesus
The Saviour is born.

Come, see the baby asleep in the hay,
Come, see the birthplace so drear.
Come, see the worshipping shepherds,
Come, see the Lord – He is here.

Fear not,
Be not afraid,
Good news
I bring to you.
This day in Bethlehem town
A Babe who is Jesus
The Saviour is born.

Come, see the Man on the Cross on the hill,
Come, see the empty tomb.
Come, see the Saviour who died for our sin,
Come, see the Lord who’s returning quite soon.

Fear not,
Be not afraid,
Good news
I bring to you.
This day in Bethlehem town
A Babe who is Jesus
The Saviour is born.

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Copyright 2006 Trevor W. Hampel

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Haiku #27 Nativity

A lamb and a donkey
Watch over the sleeping babe
In that crude manger.

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Copyright 2006 Trevor W. Hampel

Poem #19 Come See the Babe

Come See the Babe

Come, see the babe

Who was born to be King,

Come, see the Saviour

Whose praises we sing.

Come, see the light

Of His glory revealed,

Come, praise the Lord,

Our salvation He sealed.

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Copyright 2006 Trevor W. Hampel

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