Haiku #34 Red Rose

Blood red rose
Kissed gently by
Morning sunshine
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Rose in our garden

Rose in our garden

 

2 Responses to “Haiku #34 Red Rose”

  1. alex says:

    this isnt a haiku
    haikus have 7 syllables in the first line 5 in the next then 7 again why do u waste ur life with poetry ur obviously not very good at it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  2. Trevor says:

    Thanks for visiting Alex.

    With respect – you are incorrect. A haiku traditionally has 5, 7 and 5 sounds in Japanese. These sounds do not accurately translate into English syllables. For a better explanation see
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku

    Further – the word haiku does not have plural from in English.

    Modern English forms of Haiku no longer strictly follow the syllable count.

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