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		<title>By: My novel is finished</title>
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		<dc:creator>My novel is finished</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Sep 2009 12:29:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] next crucial stage is editing. In this stage I will go back over the whole manuscript, looking at all the fine details of [...]</description>
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		<title>By: Trevor</title>
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		<dc:creator>Trevor</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Sep 2009 12:22:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Just realised Karen - you know all of the above anyway since you&#039;ve been following my exploits on Twitter.

Doh! The brain is not working tonight. Not after 11 consecutive days of 2000+ words.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Just realised Karen &#8211; you know all of the above anyway since you&#8217;ve been following my exploits on Twitter.</p>
<p>Doh! The brain is not working tonight. Not after 11 consecutive days of 2000+ words.</p>
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		<title>By: Trevor</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Sep 2009 12:19:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi there Karen,

Your comments slipped under my radar - probably I was still getting over the stay in hospital!  Yes - the kidney stones were horrible. No - I don&#039;t want to experience child birth to compare notes!!

A few days after I came out of hospital my wife ended up there - but in the next room! She had a painful clot in her leg. Still giving her a little trouble but she&#039;s over the worst.

A week after she came out of hospital I ended up in bed for 9 days with the flu. Worst bout I&#039;ve ever had. Didn&#039;t get it tested to see if it was swine flu. 

All over now and feeling much better. The last 6 weeks I&#039;ve been frantically working on my novel for children. Wrote the last chapter this afternoon. Hooray - now for the editing stage! And rewriting. And proofreading! [sigh] All needs to be finished by end of November and handed up to the examiner. [bigger sigh]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi there Karen,</p>
<p>Your comments slipped under my radar &#8211; probably I was still getting over the stay in hospital!  Yes &#8211; the kidney stones were horrible. No &#8211; I don&#8217;t want to experience child birth to compare notes!!</p>
<p>A few days after I came out of hospital my wife ended up there &#8211; but in the next room! She had a painful clot in her leg. Still giving her a little trouble but she&#8217;s over the worst.</p>
<p>A week after she came out of hospital I ended up in bed for 9 days with the flu. Worst bout I&#8217;ve ever had. Didn&#8217;t get it tested to see if it was swine flu. </p>
<p>All over now and feeling much better. The last 6 weeks I&#8217;ve been frantically working on my novel for children. Wrote the last chapter this afternoon. Hooray &#8211; now for the editing stage! And rewriting. And proofreading! [sigh] All needs to be finished by end of November and handed up to the examiner. [bigger sigh]</p>
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		<title>By: Karen</title>
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		<dc:creator>Karen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Jun 2009 03:29:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Trevor

I might need to do that Masters!! I don&#039;t mind proofreading but find myself at a loss when it comes to the complete rewrite kind of edit. I think I feel like there are so many things I could do to improve/change the plot that I get overwhelmed and simply don&#039;t do anything...and yet I know that&#039;s what makes the difference between mediocrity and excellence. You have inspired me to keep at it. 

Oh, and I hope you&#039;re over your kidney stones. I had an attack while I was 30 weeks pregnant with my twins last year. Not fun at all - especially as everyone (including me) thought I was in labour. Pethidine became my new best friend for 24 hours :) And yes, having experienced both I can say with certainty that I would rather give birth anyday - even to twins!!

Karen</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Trevor</p>
<p>I might need to do that Masters!! I don&#8217;t mind proofreading but find myself at a loss when it comes to the complete rewrite kind of edit. I think I feel like there are so many things I could do to improve/change the plot that I get overwhelmed and simply don&#8217;t do anything&#8230;and yet I know that&#8217;s what makes the difference between mediocrity and excellence. You have inspired me to keep at it. </p>
<p>Oh, and I hope you&#8217;re over your kidney stones. I had an attack while I was 30 weeks pregnant with my twins last year. Not fun at all &#8211; especially as everyone (including me) thought I was in labour. Pethidine became my new best friend for 24 hours <img src='http://www.trevorhampel.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  And yes, having experienced both I can say with certainty that I would rather give birth anyday &#8211; even to twins!!</p>
<p>Karen</p>
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