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		<title>By: roxy</title>
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		<dc:creator>roxy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Mar 2011 07:37:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>hi please help jj his idea sounds really good trevor! :) :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>hi please help jj his idea sounds really good trevor! <img src='http://www.trevorhampel.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  <img src='http://www.trevorhampel.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: jj</title>
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		<dc:creator>jj</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 13 Feb 2011 03:55:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>lol hi trevor, me again, just wanted to tell you im a big fan of yours and i hope you can reply, you know, only because the last time you talked to someone was in  april 2010, its 2011 now and i seriously hope you can help me, im in desperate need of a story starter like that. :) JJ, no matter what time you reply, i will always keep on cheaking this blog every day, bye!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>lol hi trevor, me again, just wanted to tell you im a big fan of yours and i hope you can reply, you know, only because the last time you talked to someone was in  april 2010, its 2011 now and i seriously hope you can help me, im in desperate need of a story starter like that. <img src='http://www.trevorhampel.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  JJ, no matter what time you reply, i will always keep on cheaking this blog every day, bye!</p>
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		<title>By: jj</title>
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		<dc:creator>jj</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 13 Feb 2011 03:49:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>hey thanks man for the great story starters, adjusted one a bit for a school test. But do you think you could start one off for me with someone running away from 2 people, then the person being chased comes to a dead end ally way and gets cornered by the 2, then something really cool happens. please help, JJ.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>hey thanks man for the great story starters, adjusted one a bit for a school test. But do you think you could start one off for me with someone running away from 2 people, then the person being chased comes to a dead end ally way and gets cornered by the 2, then something really cool happens. please help, JJ.</p>
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		<title>By: Trevor</title>
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		<dc:creator>Trevor</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 12 Apr 2010 02:53:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for visiting my blog May, and for leaving some comments. I have also had published quite a few short stories, poems (including prize winning poems), articles and song lyrics. I have a growing collection of picture book and children&#039;s novel manuscripts which need to be sent out to publishers after I finish my current project. I have almost finished the final draft of a children&#039;s novel which will be submitted as my thesis paper for my Master of Arts in Creative Writing. Busy, busy, busy.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for visiting my blog May, and for leaving some comments. I have also had published quite a few short stories, poems (including prize winning poems), articles and song lyrics. I have a growing collection of picture book and children&#8217;s novel manuscripts which need to be sent out to publishers after I finish my current project. I have almost finished the final draft of a children&#8217;s novel which will be submitted as my thesis paper for my Master of Arts in Creative Writing. Busy, busy, busy.</p>
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		<title>By: May</title>
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		<dc:creator>May</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 02 Apr 2010 11:27:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ooops my bad. Its me again. I hadn&#039;t read the &#039;about&#039; page yet. You do have published books! Congrats!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ooops my bad. Its me again. I hadn&#8217;t read the &#8216;about&#8217; page yet. You do have published books! Congrats!</p>
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		<title>By: May</title>
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		<dc:creator>May</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 02 Apr 2010 11:24:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Trevor! Great story starters, they make me want to read more. You&#039;re obviously good at english and using words, would you have a published book out? If you don&#039;t you could take this as encouragement to publish one! :) Hopefully I will one day. Its hard for me to get my ideas together, or any at all. But I have a set topic for a short story comp I might enter. What would you write about if I said: SILVER. I automatically thought of pirates, but, I wanted something scary...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Trevor! Great story starters, they make me want to read more. You&#8217;re obviously good at english and using words, would you have a published book out? If you don&#8217;t you could take this as encouragement to publish one! <img src='http://www.trevorhampel.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  Hopefully I will one day. Its hard for me to get my ideas together, or any at all. But I have a set topic for a short story comp I might enter. What would you write about if I said: SILVER. I automatically thought of pirates, but, I wanted something scary&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Trevor</title>
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		<dc:creator>Trevor</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 26 Mar 2010 07:02:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for your comments Green.

I accept your criticism about some of them being vague - that&#039;s where you as the writer need to fill in all the details, adding colour, atmosphere, setting and so on. In my writing group we often start with a sentence like this, or a photo, object or even just a word. From the same point of inspiration can come many different and intriguing stories. That&#039;s the power of something like this; we all work differently.

As for collating all of the ideas into one page, it could easily be done. In fact, I am working on increasing the number of ideas into the hundreds and making them available here on my site. Stay tuned.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for your comments Green.</p>
<p>I accept your criticism about some of them being vague &#8211; that&#8217;s where you as the writer need to fill in all the details, adding colour, atmosphere, setting and so on. In my writing group we often start with a sentence like this, or a photo, object or even just a word. From the same point of inspiration can come many different and intriguing stories. That&#8217;s the power of something like this; we all work differently.</p>
<p>As for collating all of the ideas into one page, it could easily be done. In fact, I am working on increasing the number of ideas into the hundreds and making them available here on my site. Stay tuned.</p>
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		<title>By: Green</title>
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		<dc:creator>Green</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 26 Mar 2010 05:53:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wow. These are pretty cool and some of them really set me off thinking about what could happen next. Thank you very much! 

However i have two criticisms:  Some (but not many) of the previous ideas are a bit vague and have little information about person, place or activity. Also Would it be possible to collate all 37-odd ideas on one page? 

Thanks again.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow. These are pretty cool and some of them really set me off thinking about what could happen next. Thank you very much! </p>
<p>However i have two criticisms:  Some (but not many) of the previous ideas are a bit vague and have little information about person, place or activity. Also Would it be possible to collate all 37-odd ideas on one page? </p>
<p>Thanks again.</p>
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		<title>By: Trevor</title>
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		<dc:creator>Trevor</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 02 Jan 2010 11:14:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi there Bella,

Thanks for visiting.

I&#039;m pleased that you found these ideas useful. I find it encouraging to get feedback like this.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi there Bella,</p>
<p>Thanks for visiting.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m pleased that you found these ideas useful. I find it encouraging to get feedback like this.</p>
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		<title>By: Bella</title>
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		<dc:creator>Bella</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 13 Dec 2009 20:40:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey Trevor:
Thank you for these insanely awesome story starters! I am making a collection of short stories for my parents for Christmas and these were just what I needed to stop the writers block. Again, thank you very much!
-Bella</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey Trevor:<br />
Thank you for these insanely awesome story starters! I am making a collection of short stories for my parents for Christmas and these were just what I needed to stop the writers block. Again, thank you very much!<br />
-Bella</p>
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